Interesting TL overall, though I think you take some liberties too far.
For one, it's interesting that, especially in the beginning, given that Icelanders seem to make up a majority of the Vinnish population (and Icelanders being Icelanders) yet they are content to let Bjarny boss them around as if he were their king; even if he is smart enough to not claim such a title.
Second, how come Bjarny has no other enemies (apart from the Pagans as a group) opposing him? After Thorkell, he didn't seem to have any rivals (as Thorfinn proved to be spineless) around, which I find strange for a Norse society. It seems more likely to me that each of at least the larger settlements would want consider themselves independent entities, much like he situation in pre-unified Norway. Why hasn't it turned into a pale comparison to the petty, squabbling, kingdoms situation. How come we didn't and don't have more local leaders attempting to challenge Bjarny's rule.
Also, why would the exiled king of Norway seek shelter halfway around the world, when the Rus are so much closer. It would be easier to launch an attack from Rus lands than it would be from Vinland. I'm no sailor but, with the exception of Bjarny's pet woodworking projects, aren't we still at a point where it is difficult and dangerous to cross over the Arctic side. How come trade seems to be so regular?
Lastly, given Ake Carrsson was smart enough to realize that he couldn't wage a war with Bjarny, why did he attempt to do just that? Let's remember that even the Vikings knew when to run and when to fight. They only engaged in battles they thought they could win. If an enemy was deemed to strong or put up too big a resistance, they left to find easier targets. There is absolutely no reason for Ake Carrsson to pull off such a stunt when he clearly knows that he does not have the numbers. Fleeing to foreign lands was a tried and true method for Norsemen who were oppressed by tyrants. It would make more sense if Carrsson had attempted to flee into the interior, far from the Vinnish colonies at the start and began forging alliances with previously unafilliated tribes. I wonder if you are planning to end their story with a paganish-Quebec type situation; like having a relatively large, majority pagan kingdom surrounded by Christian territories, where the pagans are strong enough to hold that land, but lack the resources to expand beyond it.
For one, it's interesting that, especially in the beginning, given that Icelanders seem to make up a majority of the Vinnish population (and Icelanders being Icelanders) yet they are content to let Bjarny boss them around as if he were their king; even if he is smart enough to not claim such a title.
Second, how come Bjarny has no other enemies (apart from the Pagans as a group) opposing him? After Thorkell, he didn't seem to have any rivals (as Thorfinn proved to be spineless) around, which I find strange for a Norse society. It seems more likely to me that each of at least the larger settlements would want consider themselves independent entities, much like he situation in pre-unified Norway. Why hasn't it turned into a pale comparison to the petty, squabbling, kingdoms situation. How come we didn't and don't have more local leaders attempting to challenge Bjarny's rule.
Also, why would the exiled king of Norway seek shelter halfway around the world, when the Rus are so much closer. It would be easier to launch an attack from Rus lands than it would be from Vinland. I'm no sailor but, with the exception of Bjarny's pet woodworking projects, aren't we still at a point where it is difficult and dangerous to cross over the Arctic side. How come trade seems to be so regular?
Lastly, given Ake Carrsson was smart enough to realize that he couldn't wage a war with Bjarny, why did he attempt to do just that? Let's remember that even the Vikings knew when to run and when to fight. They only engaged in battles they thought they could win. If an enemy was deemed to strong or put up too big a resistance, they left to find easier targets. There is absolutely no reason for Ake Carrsson to pull off such a stunt when he clearly knows that he does not have the numbers. Fleeing to foreign lands was a tried and true method for Norsemen who were oppressed by tyrants. It would make more sense if Carrsson had attempted to flee into the interior, far from the Vinnish colonies at the start and began forging alliances with previously unafilliated tribes. I wonder if you are planning to end their story with a paganish-Quebec type situation; like having a relatively large, majority pagan kingdom surrounded by Christian territories, where the pagans are strong enough to hold that land, but lack the resources to expand beyond it.
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