I enjoyed this one. A lot of this TL has been pretty fast so it's nice to see something slowing down.
I question the viability of a military censorship agency, given historically the massive numbers of letters sent and so on. Romania here has a state post service right? I think it was part of the centralisation, and while I understand lots of Romanian society is comparably advanced, like the press and politics, but I don't think it could realistically extend to this sort of censorship.
Also, this
Consider how certain historical figures are famous with a name that wasn't contemporaneously used.
I question the viability of a military censorship agency, given historically the massive numbers of letters sent and so on. Romania here has a state post service right? I think it was part of the centralisation, and while I understand lots of Romanian society is comparably advanced, like the press and politics, but I don't think it could realistically extend to this sort of censorship.
Also, this
I found unusual for Mihai to be described as. Later we get:The real wars were fought during the reigns of Emperor Mihai
So fine, but as the founder of the nation and the most famous person in the whole country for all time I would have thought he'd have a special title like 'Great Father', or similar but obviously in Romanian.Another day in the Imperium created by Saint Emperor Mihai I.
Consider how certain historical figures are famous with a name that wasn't contemporaneously used.