A House Divided Can Stand Alone: A TL

Troyer IV

Now then, I've only read the last installment and nothing up to that point. I am now subscribed and will begin at the beginning.
 

Troyer IV

I'm finally caught up on this interesting TL. I have issue with some things, but nothing major, just some plausibility and butterflies, but it's your story and I won't question your right to tell it.

However, I hate to say, I'm a grammar nazi. "They're" and "Their" and "There" are not the same, nor are they interchangeable.

That's my only real beef. Good stuff overall, though - keep it coming!
 

BlackWave

It'd be a tough job, as European assassins would stand out a bit amongst Turks, and I think Kemal would be smart enough to give himself tight security...
 

Winston Smith

Banned
On the negative side, I kinda like Ataturk: he was both a) a reformer and b) a badass. Him and Lawrence should engage in a Gun Kata style duel. But if your intention is to have the Ottoman Empire survive, I'm fine with that.
 

The Dude

Banned
Troyer IV said:
I'm finally caught up on this interesting TL. I have issue with some things, but nothing major, just some plausibility and butterflies, but it's your story and I won't question your right to tell it.

However, I hate to say, I'm a grammar nazi. "They're" and "Their" and "There" are not the same, nor are they interchangeable.

That's my only real beef. Good stuff overall, though - keep it coming!
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Yeah, that was present early on, but I've since learned my lesson. Glad to see you like it!

BlackWave said:
It'd be a tough job, as European assassins would stand out a bit amongst Turks, and I think Kemal would be smart enough to give himself tight security...
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They're not all European. The main assassin is Persian, like I said. And since most of the collaborators are Arabs, they could infiltrate the area without too much difficulty.

Winston Smith said:
On the negative side, I kinda like Ataturk: he was both a) a reformer and b) a badass. Him and Lawrence should engage in a Gun Kata style duel. But if your intention is to have the Ottoman Empire survive, I'm fine with that.
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Now now. Just because Ataturk dies doesn't mean the Empire will survive. Who knows what could happen?
 

Lycaon pictus

Donor
Just finished reading. Phew!

I love it. Lawrence of Arabia meets Enemy at the Gates in Kuwait.

Oh, and when you get around to turning the rest of the Philippines into states, it is a matter of the utmost moral urgency that one of them be named "Sulu.":D
 

M. A. Dickens

Bumps

Lycaon pictus said:
Just finished reading. Phew!

I love it. Lawrence of Arabia meets Enemy at the Gates in Kuwait.

Oh, and when you get around to turning the rest of the Philippines into states, it is a matter of the utmost moral urgency that one of them be named "Sulu.":D
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Having a ship named USS Sulu would be awesome. ;)

Marc A
 

The Wandering Poet

Yo,
Is this timeline dead... Man I remember when it started, many moons ago. :p

So are you still interested in this TL TUSM or are your loyal fans like Troyer allowed to continue it in your absence?
 
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