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Not done bad, Hugh Capet's* and thus also Robert the Strong's* descendants are still around today and some of them even sit on a throne (like king Philip/Felipe VI of Spain). Sure the direct Capetians went extinct, but the Capetians had a lot of successful cadet branches too.

(*= The Capetians were a cadet branch of the Robertians)

I've no doubt they will be different, but even IOTL the Capetians (Valois, Bourbon etc.) were the dynasty other dynasties wanted to emulate.
 
Not done bad, Hugh Capet's* and thus also Robert the Strong's* descendants are still around today and some of them even sit on a throne (like king Philip/Felipe VI of Spain). Sure the direct Capetians went extinct, but the Capetians had a lot of successful cadet branches too.

(*= The Capetians were a cadet branch of the Robertians)

I've no doubt they will be different, but even IOTL the Capetians (Valois, Bourbon etc.) were the dynasty other dynasties wanted to emulate.

As I will do a Capetian wank, I considering that they will sit on more thrones than OTL :D.
One single personage I do not think I can replicate in my story, as he will not exist ITTL - Saint Louis IX.
In OTL, all the french kings looks back with admiration to him and try to emulate his reign (ok, some of them and not always for the good sake of France or they heads:cool:). ITTL, there will be others kings worth of admiration by all their descendents and other crowned heads of Europe...

Thanks for reading and please provide input (very much appreciated).
 
Uncertain times


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"Kroaz Du" - Breton Flag


The year of the Lord 1206

The spring start with the launch of the continental expedition by John who set sails to the continent confident with the number of the gathered troops, the large war treasury and the fact that he let his wife pregnant. If he will have a boy, than his position will be greatly improved. Rumours that Flanders will rise in rebellion concerned Philip and rejoice John. He had also other reasons to be confident in his victory this time as he convinced Aimairy of Thouars to defect with a brunch of Poitevins barons as well as with his brother, Guy of Thouars, the regent of Britany.

Guy’s position was uncertain but he could rely on a quite strong troop of about 400 lances and a couple of thousands foot mercenaries. Many Bretons do not trust him but they join him as they were concerned about the faith of the Duchy. And the fate of the Duchy depended greatly from the result of the war between France and England. Guy and his fellows knew that if Arthur is dead, Prince Louis will press the claim on the Duchy and it will be over with his power and their independence. However, if John will be victorious, he will protect him and he will become the next Duke.

In the beginning of March, the English armada anchored in the harbor of La Rochelle. Soon after landing, John led forward to Poitiers, where he was received with joy by the inhabitants. There he summoned the assembly of barons and knights from the entire Duchy of Aquitaine. The summoning had mixed results, many preferring to see their jobs and ignore the call, others arrived at Poitiers but were still cautious. The gathering of the forces flowed slowly but nearly 1000 knights responded to the call, bolstering John forces.

Hearing about English landing, King Philip also raised the levy in the kingdom and summon his vassals. He sent forward his son, Prince Louis, with his retinues and knights from Artois and a force of mercenaries and militia from Ile de France to slow down John till he will gather all the forces. While Burgundy and Champagne responded to the call of the king, Toulouse ignore it and from Flanders comes only 42 knights. The Flemish, unhappy with French influence, preferred to stay at home. They were not rebelled… yet.

Contrary of the advice of his half-brother William Longsword (bastard of King Henry II) and of William de Braose who accompanied him in the expeditions, to move rapidly forward and relive the besieged castles, John preferred to stay in Poitiers waiting the Aquitanian levy. Sadly, the discipline of his mercenary army start to relax and many extraction from the civil population were recorded, as well as rapes and murders.

Prince Louis head south-west to meet John when he heard disturbing news from Brittany. Not all the barons agreed with Guy strategy and, especially, his rule. Many getter around Alain I, count of Penthievre who had claims to the Duchy from the line of the ancient Dukes. Alain declared himself being the rightful Duke and start gathering a strong army made not only from the ranks of his supporters but he also gather everyone who was discontent with the actual regent. Alain wanted to secure the Duchy for himself while Guy was away and he sent words to John for presenting his submission if he recognize him as the true Duke. With an audacious move, with a small band of loyal men, he capture Alix, the daughter of Guy and the former Duchess Constance of Brittany, with the intention to marring her with his son Henry. Soon, nearly all north-west part of the Duchy was in his hands and he head south to conquer Nantes. In the moment he hear those facts, Louis decided to turn away with all his men and go to Brittany. He will claim the Duchy for his wife, the true heir of Duke Arthur. He choose to disobey his father and risking all the campaign in Poitou...

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The year of the Lord 1206, second part

A foggy encounter

“Many valiant knights were slayed, without honor, without glory…” from “The Breton Succession” by Audrey Verron



Friday, 7 April 1206,
Somewhere west of Chateaubriant half-way from Rennes to Nantes, Brittany

That day seems to be a regular day. All week, a gentle Breton rain softened the land and the hearts of the people. But that day the rain stopped, letting the place to a fog. A nice and thick fog as you can rarely have the chance to see.

On the banks of the Ruisseau de la Galotiere, a small rivulet overflowed in that period by the rain, a shepherd had the shock of his life. While trying to keep his flock together, hi start to see people in arms coming from everywhere. They fumble in the fog having no idea where they are.

Without having knowledge about the others, three armies were going to meet each other. From the North-West, Alain of Penthievre march towards Nantes with a strong army, from the South it was Guy of Thouars who head to Rennes and from East, after capture of Chateaubriant by surprise, Prince Louis was heading to Vannes with all his troops, except the garrison he let behind. The thick fog disorganized the march of the three armies which do not had kept the road and spread disorganized over the land and looking more like brunch of brigands than organized troops.

What happened was recorded by a monk directly recounted by the shepherd who miraculously survived this close encounter. Small bands of troops, marching without order and reconnaissance, meet each other’s at very short distance and start to engage at will. Many knew that there is a battle somewhere only from the noise and screaming and move forward to participate. There was no leadership or command, no idea about the real emplacement or the strength of the enemy forces and not always the ones they engaged were from enemy camp.

The chaos was total. For several hours, the three side battle devastate the forces of the three claimants. Slowly, the fog began to disperse and both commanders and protagonist could see the carnage and the disaster. Finally, they succeed to rally their troops and to call the withdrawal. Each camp suffered huge casualties and their forces were in completely mess. The situation of Louis was even worse. He now should now respond to the wrath of his father, the King. Soon after he arrived in Chateaubriand, he received words that King John moved north with big forces and relieved the besieged castle Loches.

While each camp retreated to reorganize their forces, another claimant to the Duchy appear - Alain IV viscount of Rohan[1]. He also had claims from the old line of Dukes and, even most important, he obtained the full support of the count Eudon III of Porhoët. Now, the war of the three pretenders become the war of the forth pretenders. While the forces of the first three were depleted and quite demoralized after the battle in the fog, Alain de Rohan had a new one smaller than other ones but it was fresh.

The situation of Louis was even worse. He now should now respond to the wrath of his father, the King. Soon after he arrived in Chateaubriand, he received words that King John moved north with big forces and relieved the besieged castle Loches. He assumed that he will move fast and relieve Chinon, the Angevin capital defended by de Brough.

Soon, a messenger having the colors of the king arrived at the castle. The King Philip had gadder the French Ost in Orleans and he is now marching downstream of Loire with all his forces. He sent words to Louis to come and meet him on the outskirts of the city Tours. He was in big rage. Now, Louis had a big dilemma. He had with him not only his men but also many of the King’s ones and he had lost many of them in the encounter on the banks of the rivulet La Galotiere. He wanted to continue with the campaign but to disobeying once again his King…

Approximately in the same period, the famous pirate Eustace the Monk, in the service of King John, conquered the Chanel Islands with a force of thirty galleys and war cogs. On his will, he also pillaged the Northern coast of Brittany and Normandy, burning the outskirts of Harfleur. He took an impressive butty and, on his way back, he captured several English merchant navies from the Cinque Ports. Eustace was very appreciated by John (who always took his share) but very hated by the English merchants for his indiscriminately attack of commercial navies French, Flemish, Breton or English alike. It was so hated that he need special escort of the King household knights to travel in England. He was already a living legend when he start his carrier in the John's service but no one could yet imagine what will follow...​
"No one would believe the marvels he accomplished, nor those witch happened to him many times" will write the author of "Histoire de Ducs de Normandie".
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[1] ITTL he don’t die as per OTL in 1205, aged 39.

Main sources:
Wikipedia
The Battle of Sandwich, by Henry Lewind Cannon

 
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France is coming

John could simply not resist the temptation to kick a man when he was down and he could not even keep his balance while doing so” from "Biography of King John of England" by W. L. Warrens[1].
The year of the lord 1206, third part

After reliving the siege of Loches, John receive the words that Philip is descending the Loire with all his army. The question was what he shall done next: reliving Chinon or marching to meat Philip. The barons split in two. One part, led by William Longsword, the Earl of Salisbury, advise to march on Chinon. The other part, led by William de Braose, insisted to march directly to meet the French, otherwise the nobles will see it as lassitude. Much of time was spent on arguing and without taking a decision. Aimary of Thouars, had heard about the Breton situation and wanted that the war finish quicker in order to be free to help of his brother. He add a valid argument. The must defeat Philip before his son will join him if he decide to do. So, marching straight to him it’s the best strategy. Finally, a decision was made. They will move north, not losing any more time.

He already had spent too much time in Poitiers, waiting the barons to assemble, but it was a worth spent time, thought John. He had the occasion to deal with the traitors Lusignan’s. John’s troops devastate their lands in several occasion and even after he received the submission of Hugues IX, he do not stopped the rides. Even more, he strip back the county of La Marche (who he previously awarded to Hugues) and request that his son and heir, Hugues, to be handle as royal hostage. With this actions, he hoped to reinforce the control on this great and disobedient family.


The Battle of Tours, 1st May 1206
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King Philip depiction in the Battle of Tours

Also known as The Second battle of Tours (the first one being fought in October 732 between Franks and Umayyads), was fought on a plain between the rivers Indre and Cher, both affluent of Loire, flanked by forests and hills. The historians greatly disagree about the numbers involved on both side, but they mostly all agree that the English had an infantry advantage of 3 to 1 and the French a cavalry advantage of 3 to 2. The mostly accepted numbers are of 12.000 infantry and 1.200 cavalry for the English, versus 4.000 infantry and around 2000 cavalry, for the French. While the English infantry was mostly composed from battle-hardened mercenaries, enforced with local levy, the cavalry was mostly composed from the Aquitain and Poitevin knights, notably from Poitiers, Thouars, Mauleon, Parthenay, and Sugeres. Even the Lusignan’s were present with a strong force. On the other side, the infantry was mostly composed by militias from Orleans and Paris, reinforced with sergeants and crossbowmen and other foot retinues, while the cavalry was formed by the flower of French chivalry, coming from Ile de France, Champagne and Burgundy, but also there were present (in small numbers) Norman (approx. 90), Flemish (approx. 40) and Angevin (approx. 120) knights who took the French part. The English had the massed infantry, led by William de Braose and William Longsword, forming one single and continuous line in the front of the battle, while the mounted nobles and knights stayed on the second line. John stay with a small troop in reserve, behind the second line.

Both John and Aimairy of Thouars had the unpleasant surprise to see the banners of Prince Louis waving on the left flank of the French army. Obeying his father and king orders, Louis had road fast to meeting point toking with him only his mounted men – knights, sergeants and crossbowmen. Louis left all his foot army in Chateaubriant under the command of a trusted man from Artois - Pierre d’Arques[2]. They had just arrived, a couple of days before crossing Loire. The sweat of the horses was not yet dried up when Louis was convoked in the King’s tent to a one to one meeting. No one know what they spooked, but when he sorted out, Louis was dismal. Furthermore, when the battle line was formed, Louis and his men were arrange on the left flank, while the right one, the most prestigious, was led by the Duke Eudes III of Burgundy. Also in the Left, was Pierre de Courtenay, sharing the command with Louis. The center was under the King’s command, seconded by William des Roches, the former John’s Seneschal of Anjou who had left his service and join the French King after he heard rumors about the murder of Arthur. The French arranges the cavalry on the front and with the infantry behind.

The battle started with a volley of arrows and crossbow bolts launched from the English line, followed by a violent cavalry attack launched by Burgundy. It was followed by charges along the entire line. The English infantry keep their line and repulsed the French, who resorted to several charges (done in small pockets) followed by retreats. The English battle line start to move forward, taking advantage to the fact that the French knight start to tired, but not all in the sometime, so gaps appeared in the formation. As the French King position was pressed by the advancing enemy, the French infantry entered in battle, defending his suzerain.

Then the decisive moment arrived. Prince Louis, spot a gap in the line who open the way to the second line. He remember the story on how Alexander the Great win the day at Gaugamela so, he reform his men and attacked thru the gap, crying: “A moi Artois![3]” The charge was done with no more than 50 knight but had a spectacular effect. Bypassing the infantry, he do not stop and smash in to the second line, surprised by the sudden appearance. He routed the distracted band of knight from Saintonge and continue to ride to the place where the King John was sitting. Seeing the mad Prince charging him, John decided to not give battle and to retreat to a safer place. The barons were shocked by his act of cowardice. Seeing on one side the French king fighting along his men his men (actually not really fighting but staying alongside them) and on the other side their king running from the bold and tremendous courageous attack of the French heir, they decided to live the field. If in that moment the barons had chosen to attack Louis, then he would be captured or worst. Seeing the barons leaving the field, the infantry lose faith and start to run away. They were cut into pieces by the French cavalry who give chase to them. William de Braose was captured, as well as several other knights, while William Longsword barely escaped. Seeing what happened, John cried treason.

W. L. Warrens write in his “Biography of King John of England”:​
“As well as John, Philip was not heroic material. A pale sickly child who grew into a fat, prematurely balding young man, Philip was not the stuff of chivalric legend. […] He was accused by many contemporaries being not a good soldier, being too soft (“trop mols”), preferring to hunt sparrows and tiny birds, but unlike John, he do not hide behind his men and definitely do not run away when the danger approached, but he stay and inspire his men.”[4]
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Soon after the battle, while Philip entered victorious in Tours, Louis gained mighty surnames as Louis le Lion or Louis le Brave, John found himself without allies, without army and without money, as he had lost the war coffers in the hands of the French. He also add another surname to the long list he already had: John the Coward. One after another, the besieged castles surrender at the sight of French victorious army. Hubert de Burgh finally capitulates after nearly 2 years of siege. The mighty castle of Chinon was now in French hands.

The rest of the French campaign was more a promenade than a real campaign. Philip quickly overrun the entire region north of the river La Dordogne. The castles surrender, the towns opened the gates and the nobles deserted “en masse” to the French King. Philip named William des Roches back as seneschal of Anjou, recognised Hugues of Lusignian as count of La Marche and tried to keep the things as much as they were before. Aimery of Thouars also pledged to forgiveness and it was awarded… but against a high price. He will pay a big fine and he will cease all support to his brother Guy. Philip planned to include much of the conquered land in the Royal Demesne but all these conquest need to be integrated first. And aside John who still kept the south of Guyenne, there were still another too urgent issues: Brittany and Auvergne. Moreover, the feudal host cannot be kept for long and knights and nobles start to leave after performing their duty of 40 days of service. Soon, he will be left with too few men to secure his conquests.

When a message arrived from John requesting peace, Philip gladly accepted. They agree on a 5 year truce. John also was very pressed as the King Alphonso of Castile invaded the county of Dax, putting Bayonne under siege, as he claim it as his wife dowry. He solved the issue by pay him out a fortune to retreat.


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Main Source:
Wikipedia
"Blood Cries Afar: The Forgotten Invasion of England 1216", By Sean McGlynn
Source of the photo: http://magnacarta800th.com/events/battlefields/magna-carta-battlefields/
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[1] Quotation from “Blood Cries Afar: The Forgotten Invasion of England 1216”, By Sean McGlynn
[2] A fictional character
[3]Literally means “To me Artois”, inspired from “A moi Melun!” Louis was count of Artois and rally his men with this battle cry.
[4] Quotation and adaptation from “Blood Cries Afar: The Forgotten Invasion of England 1216”, By Sean McGlynn
 
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John really is a joke.

Sort of, but still not.:rolleyes:
I have not alter the John (nor Louis or Philip) characters. I have inspired from their behaviors in similar situations. John is just a little worse than OTL... (remember that at Roche au Moine he refuse the engagement and retreat even if he had stronger forces than Louis). He also has a little less luck than OTL...
Louis is still as OTL - very brave, bold but impulsive and imprudent (the nickname le Lion is real). Philip, also is... well... the Augustus.
He will still have much to say in the following period. :cool:

Thanks for reading!
 
England in the five years truce

After the defeat and loses, John was seems be a broken man. The only consolation was the birth of a son. He gives him the name Henry, in honor of his father. Having an heir, consolidate his position as King of England, but the rumors of Arthur’s murdering tarnished his reputation and legitimacy.

Returned in England, John looked for what was wrong and what are the solutions. Of one thing he was sure – he will not be the king who lost the ancestral lands in France. He knew that the 5 years truce was just that – a truce. A new round will comes and this time he will not make the same errors. First, he will not fight alone anymore. France has many enemies who can be England’s friends. He tried to resurrect the complex network of alliances his brother left with.

First, he re-approached his nephew, the Emperor Otto IV. He give him money to fight back his counter pretender, Philip of Swabia, on the promise that when time will come, he will help against France. The death of his rival in 1208 significantly improved Otto’s position… for a while, as the Pope excommunicate him in 1209[1], short after crowning him as Emperor and start to support a new pretender – the king of Sicily, Frederick Roger of Hohenstaufen. John start to pay the succession war in Brittany, in order to keep Prince Louis away from the Duchy, he pay the rebellious Flemish barons to reject the French rule and he approached Toulouse to become allies. John reinforce the relations with Sancho of Navarre, repair the ones with Alphonso of Castile and conclude an alliance with Peter (Pero/Pere) of Aragon.

John knew that both the weakness and the strength of England is being an island and he knew what should be done. He start to rebuild the fleet and expand it more than it was ever before. Strong and big new battlements were built and the existing ones were rearmed.

He personally surveyed the condition of the Royal castles, spending fortune to building, repair and improve them and, especially, to provide them with enough means to conduct war if needed, both defensively and offensively. The side back of this actions was the retreat of money from the economy in order to be stored in those castles, ready to be used for paying mercenaries, and the people start to fill the lack of enough cash.

All that required money. Huge sums of money, so he looked to new sources of them. He worked hard for putting order in England’s economy and administration. He travel in the whole country, putting things in order and reassume the King control and justice. He knew England better than any other king before him. John also derived income from fines, court fees and the sale of charters and other privilege and, of course, the Jews. He was a pioneer on finances, creating a new tax on income and movable goods and a new set of import and export duties payable directly to the crown. These innovative measures will be full used by the kings after him and even exported on the continent, but was not without consequences for John reputation who was perceived as "avaricious, miserly, extortionate and moneyminded".

Having less and less confidence in his barons, John preferred to use the privilege in which feudal military service was avoided by a cash payment to the king. This was called scutage and used before only as exceptional cases. Being always short of money, John transform it into a regular way of extorting money. During his reign, he levied scutage payments twelve[2] times, more than all three previous kings, and most of them were levied in the absence of military campaigns. He also maximized his right to demand relief payments when estates and castles were inherited, but he use this as way of putting down the un-trusting barons, charging them enormous sums, beyond their abilities to pay.

John made full use of the already established practices by his father and brother of “ira et malevolentia” – the right of the king to express his anger and displeasure at particular barons or clergy. Also, he governed by the established principle of vis et voluntas, or "force and will", taking executive and sometimes arbitrary decisions, often justified on the basis that a king was above the law. What John lacked was the empathy and sense of measure, to know when to stop and when enough is enough.
The best example of exacerbating use of exacerbated repressive measure against disgraced barons was the de Braose case. While he campaigned in France, the King gives him many estates, especially the welsh castles of Skenfrith, Grosmont and the White Castle in Gwent. Some see that as a bribe for his involvement in Arthur’s disappearance. Now, John start to find reasons to take them back. He cited overdue money that de Braose owed the Crown from his estates and he seized the castles and many of his estates in Sussex and Devon. As revenge, de Braose's wife, Maud, fled to Wales and speak loud and clear that John had murdered his nephew Arthur.

But John do not bear to be outdone. He chase her the next two years and once captured her and her son William, he put them in prison, starving them to death[3]. While de Braose aroused the jealousy of the other barons during his rise, the arbitrary and violent manner of his fall creates great indignation among them.

Another complicating element of John Kingship was the conflict with the Pope. Everything start when John refuse the Pope’s appointment of Stephan Langton as Archbishop of Canterbury. It was not the first time when the King of England entered in conflict with the Pope, as they had exercised a great deal of power over the church within their territories, but this time Innocent III was decided to bring England to the fold and make an example in the Christendom of what happened if a King defy the Pope. In March 1208 he placed an interdict on England who was perceived by John as a true declaration of war, so he confiscated the “seized the lands of those clergy unwilling to conduct services, as well as those estates linked to Innocent himself; he arrested the illicit concubines that many clerics kept during the period, only releasing them after the payment of fines; he seized the lands of members of the church who had fled England, and he promised protection for those clergy willing to remain loyal to him[FONT=&quot][4][/FONT]”. All that bring him huge amount of moneys but also the Innocent’s wrath, who excommunicate him next year, declaring him as disposed of his reign and of all his territories. The excommunication, his acts against the clergy and the accusation of atheism were big stains on his name and on the perception of the population. Contrary to France, who’s King has also problems with the pope, the clergy become intrusively hostile to him and all his qualities were overshadowed by his defects in the both internal and external perception.

By 1210, John become worried as the last year before the truce will end… Preparation for war increased and a new fine was imposed on Jews to finance a new expedition. But the year brought much joy of John, as his wife gave birth to a second son. John give him the name Richard, after his brother. The birth was rather difficult for the queen who spent long time in bed, many being worried that she will died. John, who seems to be in love of his wife, was very joyful when her health become better, giving a large banquet and paying for the food of more then 3000 poor peoples across the country[5].


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Main Sources:
Wikipedia
"The Household Knights of King John" By S. D. Church
"King John: New Interpretations" by S. D. Church
"King John: England's Evil King?" by Ralph Turner

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[1] Earlier than OTL.
[2] In OTL was done eleven times. ITTL, higher loses and the payment of Alphonso, forced John to requesting one more, and all that were done in shorter period.
[3] This had happened IOTL.
[4] Token from “From Domesday Book to Magna Carta 1087–1216” by Stephen Poole
[5] Three times more than the greatest charity act known that John has done in OTL (already more important than the most of the other such acts of the kings of his time). Also, ITTL, his son Richard was born one year later than OTL.
 
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France in the five years truce

The first notion of sovereign authority developed in this period. The French King was regarded as Emperor in his own Kingdom. The beginning of territorial demarcation by formal boundaries date also from this period. Where boundaries exactly lay was of course a different matter, but there was a distinct territorial unit, a distinct Regnum Francie.” Excerp from “The Sovereign State and Its Competitors: An Analysis of Systems Change” by Hendrik Spruyt
Being the great victor in the war, Philip II fully enjoyed the great prestige and glory gained on the battlefields, but also the great riches and wealth accumulated during his conquests. More and more, he was named as Philip Augustus, King of France. The surname given by the court chronicler Rigord pleased him very much, especially as it was a direct and clear reference to the emperor Augustus. After wall, the king of France was the emperor in his realm and he will made this abstract concept a real one.

The shift from King of the Franks to the King of the French it was a conscious and assumed one. He want to send a clear message that he is not only a King of the Franks, elected by his pears, but the King of one territorial space, precisely defined as France, chosen by God and anointed by the Church, governing over all the territories that the Kingdom enclosed. At least, this was the theory… till when actual it will happened it will be a long way and many, many years… But it was the first time when he tried to establish his power on territorial grounds and not on personal relations. It was the first steps from suzerainty to sovereignty. He tried to extend the concept of France from Ile de France and Royal Demesne to the entire Kingdom.

But all these great achievements do not come without costs. If the drain of economy for paying the troops and for the war effort could be replaced by a conscious exploitation of the land, increase fiscality and, why not, some plunder and amends, the drain of capable and trusting men was not so easy to replace. Of course, as in England, the King rely primarily on the household knights, a multitasking and versatile class of loyal servants directly responding to the King and always at his disposal. Their ranks grow but not as fast, nor as much as it was needed.

But the conquest needed to be integrated and it could not be done in one day… For the moment he kept everything in place as he founded, but slowly imposed the Royal authority, power and law.

Normandy was the first integrated into Royal Demesne, but more structure were exported and applied on the other King’s lands then imported, as the Duchy was admirably ruled and organized. Still, the lands were devastated by the long war and the finances of the Duchy were on negative, more money were spent to defense than it brought in the coffers. The situation was quickly balanced and soon turned on profit as the commerce on Seine flourished and compensate the loss of the commerce with England. Philip hesitated if he will keep the Duchy as distinct entity or not… but in the end he decided that it will never be again a Duke of Normandy. The parliaments of Rouen and Paris agree with the unification and it was the first time when France arrived on the shore of the sea.

The other regions that were slower to integrate were the counties of Anjou, Touraine, Maine, Poitiers, and Poitou, conquered from John. The county of Angouleme was still debatable as it was by right the property of the Queen of England, but occupied by the French. Philip preferred to keep the structure in place, confirm the existing owners and seneschals and only slowly imposing his power. While all the great seniors of the duchy of Aquitaine becomes theoretically the direct vassals of the King, they remained practically independents, being more allies of the King rather than his subordinates. This region was far away to become part of France…

While consolidate his rule over his conquest, Philip also had many problems to deal with. First it was the Bretton war of Succession. A forth way war were one of the protagonists was his son. Being also very angry on him as his lack of obedience nearly lost him the war, Philip do not want to help him directly, also for not worrying to much the great barons who already not looked very favorably to the such dramatically increase of power and lands of the king. Still, in particular, he give him free hand and a large sum of money to pay for the war. The county of Artois was rich but not enough. The war in Brittany will still drag for several years, up to 1209.

The second great issue was the Flemish one. While theoretically Joan was the Countess of both Flanders and Hainaut and it was in his custody, the two counties were ungoverned and on the brink of rebellion. Philip hoped that once his cousin, Pierre of Dreux, will marry Joan, the region will finally stabilize and his rule will not be any more challenged. The control of county of Namur by Yollanda and Pierre of Courtenay was also very loose and do not help too much in stabilizing the situation. Even more, the disrupted wool commerce with England angered the merchants and the burgers of the Flemish towns and the ban of commercialization with the enemy that Philip tried to impose was largely ignored. Moreover, Eustache le Moine’s activities in the Chanel was a real problem that need to be resolved. John used him to create havoc in Normandy and to finance the rebels in Brittany and Flanders, bypassing the terms of the truce, so something should be done. So Philip decide that France need a fleet. First time in history, France start to build navies in Rouen, Havres, Harfleur and Caen.

Other issues were the Count of Auvergne that refused the King authority and the succession in Champagne. While the first was deal with two war campaigns that leaved the Count Guy II of Auvergne only with a fraction of his lands. The campaigns were led by Guy II of Dampierre, constable of Champagne and Lord of Dampierre (by birth) and Burbon (by marriage), on the justification of Auvergne’s attacks against the royal abbey of Mozac and the priory of Marsat. Posing as Church defender, Philip kill to three birds with one stone: he earned the Church gratitude, he brought the rebellious count under his suzerainty and seize and annex the territory that will become “Terre d’Auvergne”, part of Royal Demesne.

The Champagne succession, was more a delicate issue to deal with… While the rightful heir was Theobald, he was just a child and he had many difficulties to overcome: a large debt inherited from his uncle Henry II that need to be paid, the challenging of his right of succession by Erard of Brienne and the constant meddling of his mother, Blanche of Navarre, who wanted to rule as regent but who was despised by the Champagne nobles. The king treat the issue very careful, as he greatly rely on the Champagne nobility and his mighty knights to bolster his cavalry, as well as the protection of the eastern territory of the Kingdom. The Foires of Champagne brought much wealth and he do not want that the merchants will shift eastern, outside his control. The greatest achievement of the King was acquiring the tutorship of Theobald from his mother, a movement that bring the county closer in his orbit, as well as keeping the peace, because the discontented lords do not wanted to challenge directly the King.

In 1208, all France was in joy as Eleanor of Brittany give birth to a second son, named Louis after his father. The succession of France seems now ensured. Still, the year had brought also disturbing news. The first one, comes from the east as the French ally, Philip of Swabia, was assassinated and now Otto was the uncontested King of Germany and soon was crown Emperor by the Pope.

The second one, even more troubling, come from Rome. The pope Innocent III decide to eradicate the heresy that flourish in the South of France and call for a crusade against the Cathars. The trigger was the killing of papal legate, Pierre of Castelnau by some knights on the service of the Count Raymond VI of Toulouse, several days after his excommunication for not taking measure against the heresy. The Pope requested Philip to lead the Crusade but he denied as he do not want to be involved into this affair, having both John and Otto at his back, plus many other unfinished business.


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Main Sources:
Wikipedia
“The Sovereign State and Its Competitors: An Analysis of Systems Change” by Hendrik Spruyt
"The Government of Philip Augustus: Foundations of French Royal Power in the Midle Age" By John W. Baldwin
"The Household Knights of King John" By S. D. Church
 
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Vive le Duke!
“Do you want be my man without any reserve? Asked the King.
Yes, I do! Said the Duke kneeling. His hands are joined in those of the King. I promise on my faith that I would be faithful from this moment to you, my suzerain liege and I never do anything evil against you, in good faith and without deception.The two seal the alliance with a kiss.
[1] Excerpt from “Grand Chronicles of Brittany
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The war of Breton succession was seen as more a game of thrones than a real war for a throne. The death of Arthur left vacant the throne of the Duchy so, in the context of Capetian-Plantagenet war, four claimants play a game of mouse and cat with their armies and loyalties for nearly four years. This war inspired a modern author of historical fantasy to give the name of his novel “Game of Throne”.

After the fogy encounter on the banks of the Ruisseau de la Galotiere and after the French victory of Tours, the war come to a halt. The apparition of the forth claimant, the count of Rohan, just complicated the facts. The following two years, had seen no battle, just few skirmishes between small bands of men. Guy of Thouars retreat to Nantes and hoped to rebuild his forces and receiving help from his brothers. He also controlled most of the county of Vannes. Alain of Penthievre returned on his county and rebuild a strong force with the money of King John. He also had the loyalty of Leon and Cornouaille. While Louis of France made Chateaubirant his headquarters, he knew that he need to attract loyalties of the local nobility. His first move, after securing a large transfer of money from the Royal treasury guarded by the Templar brother Haimard[2], was to conquer Rennes. The march on Rennes, side by side with his wife on the name who he claimed the crown, was the first occasion for Louis to be seen by the Bretton people and to attire loyalties. This time it was not a lighting attack but more a show of force and power. Rennes capitulate without fight and become the new capital of the territory on Louis control. He gives a market charter to the town and start to reinforce the castle and the city walls.

Found in the middle, Alain IV of Rohan, and Eudon III of Porhoët, become the target of the intrigues and changing loyalties. After realising itself that he has no chance to become duke, not after losing nearly half of his men during an assault against Vannes and after defection of Eudon to Thouars, Alain start to reconsider his options. He offer his support to the other Alain but in the same time he approached Louis to keep opened any option.

Thouars see his position crumble when Alain of Penthievre conquer Vannes. Soon Eudon of Penthievre change once again the camp to Alain, that seems to be the winner, as Louis do not had any further success while most of the Bretton nobility refuse to see the Duchy on the Capetian yoke

The assault of Mont Saint Michel


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Model of the abbey of Mont Saint Michel in the XII century.

In 1208, Eustache le Moine attacked the abbey Mont Saint Michel with a strong force. He was helped by his former patron, Renaud count of Dammartin (by birth), Mortain, Varennes, Clermont, Aumale (granted by King) and Boulogne (by marriage), a childhood friend of King Philip who seems he had change the camp and pay homage to John. In the way of the abbey, Renaud sack the city of Avranche and pillage even the cathedral of the city.

They both laid siege to Mont Saint Michel, massacre the population of the burg and put fire to the rest, fire who spread to the northern part of the abbey. The assault finally failed cause of the tide who drowned many of the besiegers. The navies of Eustache could not approached either because of the sand dunes under the waves that protected the island.

The fidelity of the abbey was uncertain. Theoretically, it was part of Normandy and recognized as lord the Duke who was also the King of England. After the conquest of Normandy, the monks purely avoided to choose a camp. When John requested them the due taxes, the abbot responded by a question: “Are you the Duke of Normandy?”. This answered angered John who requested le Moine and Renaud to teach them a lesson. Unfortunately, it was a wrong move, as the abbot asked help from the King… and it was Louis of France who came in help with several hundreds of men and relive the siege. Louis entered in the abbey and swear that he will pay for all the damage that Eustache and Renaud had done.

Hearing about this, Philip angered and declare Renaud forfeit, confiscating all his estates. He sent troops to size the castles and lands. After unsuccessful trying to resist against the royal troops, Renaud takes refugee to London.


My God, this war is already way too long!

Anyone in Brittany, from nobles to the latest peasant had enough of this war that brought nothing good of it. Just bands of mercenaries roaring back and forward for plunder, deprivations, crops burned or grazed before maturating, the livestock stolen by the armies for food and nearly zero commerce.

The beginning of the year 1209 was very tense as a final confrontation seems to be inevitable. After avoiding it and resorting to skirmishing and sieges, now everybody looked to a open confrontation.

Finally Guy of Thouars, pressed by his brother Aimery, make peace with Louis. Aimery was quite forced as he was captured by William des Roches after his army was scattered in battle. He had not respected the agreement to not help anymore his brother so he attired the King wrath. His castle of Thouars was besieged by Philip’s army and the Airvault and Parthenay were already conquered. Guy recognize Louis as rightful Duke on behalf of his wife and open the city gates of Nantes.

The battle that really decided the tides was fought in 1 May between the forces of Louis and Guy on one side and Alain of Penthievre on the other side. Alain had on his side Eudon of Porhoët and Alain of Rohan but also many mercenaries paid by John of England via Eustache le Moine. Louis has also many mercenaries paid by French money and Cadoc and his welsh company fought in his ranks. Still, the most important help was brought by Robert of Dreux and Pierre de Courtenay who come with 180 lances just two days before.

The two armies met at Grand-Champ, north-west of Vannes and the encounter was very bloodier and a very close run. It was finally decided by the treason of Alain of Rohan who changed the camp to Louis in the most critical moment. Defeated, Alain of Penthievre retreat with his scattered army and start to loose supporters, first one being Eudon who pay homage to Louis soon after the battle, while the victor entered in Vannes after only 3 days of siege. Till the end of the year, nearly all the Duchy was in Louis hands and Alain was besieged in the castle of Saint-Brieuc. After a long siege and several failed assaults, the castle was finally captured by Cadoc who soon become known as the “Scourge of the Castles”.

Long Live the Duke Louis I of Brittany!

In 25 December 1209, after the mass of Christmas, Louis and his wife Eleanor, were crowned as Duke and Duchess of Brittany. Louis was theoretically Duke jure uxoris, but it was considered Duke in his own right as he was "chef de son épouse la duchesse" (chief of his wife the Duchess) and, after all, he just conquered the country with his sword. Louis make a promise to the assembles of "Pays Bretonnes" to keep the Duchy separate from France after he will become king. This pleased the nobles and the people concerned to lose their independence. After the festivity, the couple traveled to Paris were they celebrate the New Year and pay homage to the King of France. As reward, the King erected the Duchy as Peerage of France.

It seems that the peace come again on the Breton lands, but it will pass another 2 years till the authority of the new Duke will be imposed on the all coins of the Duchy. Louis need loyal men on key places but also need the loyalty of Breton nobles. He pardoned Alain of Penthievre and let him keep his lands... but with the condition that his son Henry will be tutored by Louis. The Duke also promised that he will arrange his marriage with Alix, the daughter of Guy of Thouars and Constance of Brittany. The viscount Alain of Rohan was also made Grand Senechal of Brittany and he receive the promise that his latest child, Alain, will marry Catherine, the second daughter of Guy and Constance. After all, this was the agreement for changing the camp. Guy of Thouars remain a high figure in Brittany... at least for a while. He become Marchall of the Duchy and held large estates.

During the years of anarchy and war, the level of brigandage attained astonishing cotes. The frequent raids of Eustache hamper the commerce and, overall, the economy need long time to recover. Louis pass several laws to help the commerce and focused on building a navy. After all, the Bretons were known by their skills on the sea and the sea was not in friendly hands now. He also reopen many salt mines that were deserted during the period and encourage the fisheries and the sheep breeding. Louis hoped to replace the English wool commerce with Flanders with a Breton one.


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Sources:
Wikipedia
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crown_(heraldry)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mont_Saint-Michel
"The Government of Philip Augustus: Foundations of French Royal Power in the Middle Age" By John W. Baldwin
[1] After Galbert de Bruges. https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hommage_féodal
[2] From "The Government of Philip Augustus: Foundations of French Royal Power in the Middle Age" By John W. Baldwin
 
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Nobody? :eek:

I believed that I will be banished from the forum for using "Game of Thrones" references...

As for making Louis the Duke of Brittany.... well, it was obvious, isn't? after all, is a Capetian wank. Plus, in this context, he will have full support of his father (even if less official) as Philip Augustus will not let Brittany gone to someone friendly to John. And Dreux and Curtennay were those who helped OTL Louis against his attempt to conquer England.

Cheers!

PS: There is one more update before the truce will gone... we'll need to say some words about Languedoc and his Crusade :confused:
 
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