I'm just in the middle of reading your TL and really feel the need to compliment you for it. The tale you are spinning is truly amazing, the characters are fully formed and for the most part likeable and the way you have their lives entwined is awe inspiring. So kudos to you and I shall byuy the ebook very soon. The amount of research and work you invested in this makes it a brilliant read one can't put down.

Thanks for sharing.
 
Nancy has taken the first step into a larger universe. I hope Kat gave her some tips on how to keep private matters private in the mail.
Mom told me how one of her professors at Clark (Worcester, Massachusetts, in the 1960's) chose to break what he called a rediculous law to educate his female students about birth control. Discussion of it was illegal in Massachusetts in the 1960's.

In this timeline, the USA is going to be even more backwards in that regard. I wouldn't be surprised if Ian Flemming's books, if he goes with a Jane Bond, are strongly objected to in the USA. It won't be what Germany and the USA DO that keeps fueling the Trans-Atlantic rift, but what they stand for. Germany, with the trappings of Empire in a society that stands fro equal rights for all, contrasted with the USA. The USA has the trappings of a republic, but it stands for equal rights for all white men, and lesser rights for anyone else, with a seriously flawed electoral system.

There's no reason for antisemitism to go out of style in the USA in this timeline, either. The USA looks like it will progress in the direction of equality very slowly.
 
And you'll have the British Empire who are less liberal than Germany in many ways, but more liberal than the US being piggy in the middle.
 
Nancy has taken the first step into a larger universe. I hope Kat gave her some tips on how to keep private matters private in the mail.
Mom told me how one of her professors at Clark (Worcester, Massachusetts, in the 1960's) chose to break what he called a rediculous law to educate his female students about birth control. Discussion of it was illegal in Massachusetts in the 1960's.

In this timeline, the USA is going to be even more backwards in that regard. I wouldn't be surprised if Ian Flemming's books, if he goes with a Jane Bond, are strongly objected to in the USA. It won't be what Germany and the USA DO that keeps fueling the Trans-Atlantic rift, but what they stand for. Germany, with the trappings of Empire in a society that stands fro equal rights for all, contrasted with the USA. The USA has the trappings of a republic, but it stands for equal rights for all white men, and lesser rights for anyone else, with a seriously flawed electoral system.

There's no reason for antisemitism to go out of style in the USA in this timeline, either. The USA looks like it will progress in the direction of equality very slowly.

London, England

To Cmdr. Fleming

I read the advanced copy of Romanov Express provided by your publisher.

While I remember many of the events that you based your book on, I don’t recall several items featured, notably shoot outs and car chases.

Most of all, the way you depicted any fictional relationship between a character based on me and your Agent Bond borders on slander.

If you ever return Germany I wish to go over those mistakes one by one so that you can make the necessary corrections.

We don’t want this to be seen as a serious error in judgement on your part.

Sincerely K.M.

The now Countess Katherine von Mischner had sent that telegram to Ian’s publisher as well as him a couple months before. The publisher had asked for a rewrite of several chapters of the book and Ian had the telegram matted and framed. Apparently, Katherine hadn’t liked some of the aspects of the way she had been depicted and sent off that telegram full of implied threats. Ian suspected that invitation to go to Germany would result in him getting grabbed by Abwehr and having her punctuate her points on his mistakes by breaking bones and carving him up with that wicked knife of hers.

The truth was that the rewrite had probably made it a better novel over all. In retaliation for her criticism of the advanced copy he’d made Andrea Herzog a plain, androgynous figure. Ironically, he’d somehow managed to capture what Kat Mischner, the working-class girl from Pankow-Heinersdorf was really like as opposed to the Countess Katherine in the process. This had also had a moderating effect on James Bond in the process. It was sort of hard to depict him as the man’s man when he needed to be a professional around the woman he was partnered with, lest she force feed him his own balls.

No Jane Bond, but TTL's James Bond is quite a lot different from OTL's. I think it highly likely that using the Andrea Herzog character would touch on subjects anathema to the Comstock Pecksniffs.
 
Germany, with the trappings of Empire in a society that stands fro equal rights for all, contrasted with the USA. The USA has the trappings of a republic, but it stands for equal rights for all white men, and lesser rights for anyone else, with a seriously flawed electoral system.
Quoted for truth. When discussing TTL we should be mindful that the German Empire of the 1960s has little to nothing in common with the Empire 50 years earlier. It had two transformative wars (which ended differently OTL) and an abortive revolution. Of course, the filp-side (namely, lacking one formative war entriely while the other ended different to OTL) is that the USA has little to nothing in common with the self-percieved guardian of democracy and liberty it was in the 1960s OTL.

If you are interested in a more schorlary take, read "War! What is it good for?" by Ian Morris for an examination of the subject "War as a national formative experience in the 20th century".
 
IMHO, a Constitutional Monarchy has a bit of an advantage in that the monarch performs the ceremonial duties which allows the chief executive to concentrate on governing.

It also elevates the position of head of state above the normal political fray. An elected official will always be tied to a specific political party and its policies as well as the ongoing campaigning for votes. This is expected of a head of government (prime minister, chancellor, etc) but I think sits poorly with a head of state who must be seen to be neutral politically, not tied to the policies of any specific government and representative of the entire state instead of the constituency that voted for them.
 
My fearless (inaccurate) predictions for 1947:

In the United States President Dewey will seek short term fixes instead of long term solutions by trying to divide the Democratic Party on North-South lines with the hope of running against a "Do Nothing Congress".
The blind squirrels of the FBI will stumble across the sabotage of the Manhattan Project when they pick up a former NKVD agent with a degree from CCNY who was employed by Emerson Electronics as an electrical engineer working on proximity fuses.

In Great Britain the bookies are doing a brisk business in betting over who will Princess Elizabeth marry, the favorite right now is the nephew of Lord Mountbatten, Prince Phillip of Greece but there has been some action on a couple of princes of the Cadet branch of the Hohenzollern Family.
Great Britain will join France and the Benelux countries in a customs union to counteract Germany's economic and political power and will try to get other countries in Europe to join.

In Germany the main problem is inflation due to pent up consumer demands fueled by the wartime expansion of the workforce and enforced savings.
With the added costs of rebuilding Poland and the reconstruction of the nations of the former Soviet Union, Germany is unable to quickly reduce government spending and transition to a consumer based economy.

Latin America will be a sore point in German-American foreign policy as the United States seeks to undermine Pro-German governments.

In Asia the United States, Great Britain, France, and Germany will find themselves being played against each other by China, Japan, Korea,and Vietnam for influence and economic development.
 
A Family tree of the von Holz family

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Part 45, Chapter 587
Chapter Five Hundred Eighty-Seven


27th January 1947

Berlin

Tilo had made a point of burning everything he had written before getting conscripted. He’d settled for that when what he had really wanted to do was give his younger self a major ass kicking. Reier had found that extremely funny, I’m one of the ones who did give you that ass kicking, he’d said, along with the entire Pacific Theater. It was impossible to remain a conceited little shit when living on the transport ships and then in the jungles. Not if you wanted to live to talk about it.

The result was that as predicted, he had basically been back to square one as far as the University was concerned. The University had been apologetic and had offered him a leg up using what they referred to as Life Credits. His returning as a decorated Officer had certainly counted as having gotten exactly that over the prior years. He had debated with himself until he’d talked with his father who told him that he would have to be insane not to take that opportunity. He’d eventually taken the offer, meaning that he had three years to think about what he wanted instead of five.

Since then Tilo had been taking classes, working in the Military Museum’s Archive project and flirting with the girls who also worked there. He had found the portable typewriter that he’d used to type up Nietzschean screeds years earlier at his parent’s house, the screeds had been among the things he’d burnt, but he’d kept the typewriter. It had started off as a term project, but he had a growing stack of pages that were becoming his manuscript about his experiences in the Pacific. His hope was that it would help him put the events of his life into perspective.


Reichlin-Lars Airfield

The new plane from Focke-Wulf, FW-270 was a complete redesign of the FW-252 that they had grown used to. The plane had search radar in the nose and radome filled most of the enlarged air intake. The engine had been moved back to the tail which had allowed the wings and landing gear to be redesigned. All of this had allowed more hardpoints under the wings and a new one under the lengthened fuselage. Already, jokes were being made about it being a Großer Hühnerhabicht. Those who had never liked that name in the first place had immediately objected.

Lenz could have cared less, he was the one who had this fun new toy to play with. The radar was easy enough to use and in combat it worked in conjunction with the new air-to-air missiles. The old, extremely unpopular, wire guided missiles that were only good against bombers had required the interceptor to fly level while the pilot guided it in. With these new ones would get a radar lock from the search radar, the pilot would fire the missile and a few seconds later the target was an expanding fireball. The plane itself was a dream to fly. Where the Hühnerhabicht had been a stripped-down dragster the new plane was a finely tuned touring car. Just as fast, but could it ever take the turns. And the two 30mm Cannons left no doubts about this Chicken Hawk's pedigree.

When Lenz hopped out of the cockpit, he had such a wide smile on his face he overheard someone in the ground crew make a wisecrack about how they needed to look out if the JG’s XO was so happy. Lenz didn’t care, this new airplane was incredible.


London, England

No one knew who had been the first person to say it but so long as they spell your name right there’s no such thing as bad publicity. Ian Flemings book had been released to an indifferent public, a couple months earlier. Critics had panned it as being poorly written, misogynistic and full of innuendo. Fleming had to concede that those were valid critiques of his work. Then something happened. A copy of Romanov Express was reviewed by a New York Times literary critic who very vocally declared it to be evidence that of the decline and fall of Western Civilization was at hand. That had spurred sales of the in the New York market. Then America had discovered Andrea Herzog.

It had been a bit of a dig against Kat von Mischner for her reaction to the first draft that had prompted a rewrite. Fleming had included a few hints based on things that the Soviets had said about Kat and her close friendship with Helene von Richthofen. Fleming knew there was no truth to those rumors. An MI6 team had stumbled over Helene’s honeymoon in Italy with Kat’s older brother, the word voracious been thrown around. Fleming’s only thought on the matter was that they should see what was going on in a few years. But he had dropped more than a few hints in his book that Andrea Herzog swung both ways and the moral scolds across the Atlantic had screamed bloody murder because of it. Now the book couldn’t be printed fast enough to keep up with sales.

God bless America, Fleming thought to himself as he banged away on his typewriter. May that lot of flaming hypocrites never get a clue and ruin his aspirations.

Now, Fleming had the publisher asking him to write the sequel that he was already halfway done with. Of course, he wanted to do a sequel, he had sheep to fleece.
 
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A tale of two authors:

Tilo had made a point of burning everything he had written before getting conscripted. He’d settled for that when what he had really wanted to do was give his younger self a major ass kicking

He had found the portable typewriter that he’d used to type up Nietzschean screeds years earlier at his parent’s house, the screeds had been among the things he’d burnt, but he’d kept the type writer. It had started off as a term project, but he had a growing stack of pages that were becoming his manuscript about his experiences in the Pacific. His hope was that it would help him put the events of his life into perspective.

No one knew who had been the first person to say it but so long as they spell your name right there’s no such thing as bad publicity. Ian Flemings book had been released to an indifferent public, a couple months earlier. Critics had panned it as being poorly written, misogynistic and full of innuendo. Fleming had to concede that those were valid critiques of his work. Then something happened. A copy of Romanov Express was reviewed by a New York Times literary critic who very vocally declared it to be evidence that of the decline and fall of Western Civilization was at hand. That had spurred sales of the in the New York market. Then America had discovered Andrea Herzog.

It had been a bit of a dig against Kat von Mischner for her reaction to the first draft that had prompted a rewrite. Fleming had included a few hints based on things that Soviets had said about Kat and her close friendship with Helene von Richthofen. Fleming knew there was no truth to those rumors. An MI6 team had stumbled over Helene’s honeymoon in Italy with Kat’s older brother, the word voracious been thrown around. Fleming’s only thought on the matter was that they should see what was going on in a few years. But he had dropped more than a few hints in his book that Andrea Herzog swung both ways and the moral scolds across the Atlantic had screamed bloody murder because of it. Now the book couldn’t be printed fast enough to keep up with sales.

God bless America, Fleming thought to himself as he banged away on his typewriter. May that lot of flaming hypocrites never get a clue and ruin his aspirations.

Now, Fleming had the publisher asking him to write the sequel that he was already halfway done with. Of course, he wanted to do a sequel, he had sheep to fleece.

Tilo with TTL's From Here to Eternity and Fleming with Lady Chatterly's Lover.

(IOTL, I wasn't thrilled with either's literary merit. Feel free to substitute other titles for a definitive war novel and for something best known for being outrageous to popular mores.)
 
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No one knew who had been the first person to say it but so long as they spell your name right there’s no such thing as bad publicity. Ian Flemings book had been released to an indifferent public, a couple months earlier. Critics had panned it as being poorly written, misogynistic and full of innuendo. Fleming had to concede that those were valid critiques of his work. Then something happened. A copy of Romanov Express was reviewed by a New York Times literary critic who very vocally declared it to be evidence that of the decline and fall of Western Civilization was at hand. That had spurred sales of the in the New York market. Then America had discovered Andrea Herzog.
who is Andrea Herzog in the book?
 
has kate read the book yet?

To Cmdr. Fleming

I read the advanced copy of Romanov Express provided by your publisher.

While I remember many of the events that you based your book on, I don’t recall several items featured, notably shoot outs and car chases.

Most of all, the way you depicted any fictional relationship between a character based on me and your Agent Bond borders on slander.

If you ever return Germany I wish to go over those mistakes one by one so that you can make the necessary corrections.

We don’t want this to be seen as a serious error in judgement on your part.

Sincerely K.M.

The now Countess Katherine von Mischner had sent that telegram to Ian’s publisher as well as him a couple months before. The publisher had asked for a rewrite of several chapters of the book and Ian had the telegram matted and framed. Apparently, Katherine hadn’t liked some of the aspects of the way she had been depicted and sent off that telegram full of implied threats. Ian suspected that invitation to go to Germany would result in him getting grabbed by Abwehr and having her punctuate her points on his mistakes by breaking bones and carving him up with that wicked knife of hers.

The truth was that the rewrite had probably made it a better novel over all. In retaliation for her criticism of the advanced copy he’d made Andrea Herzog a plain, androgynous figure. Ironically, he’d somehow managed to capture what Kat Mischner, the working-class girl from Pankow-Heinersdorf was really like as opposed to the Countess Katherine in the process. This had also had a moderating effect on James Bond in the process. It was sort of hard to depict him as the man’s man when he needed to be a professional around the woman he was partnered with, lest she force feed him his own balls.

An advanced copy, which prompted a rewrite.
 
Since then Tilo had been taking classes, working in the Military Museum’s Archive project and flirting with the girls who also worked there. He had found the portable typewriter that he’d used to type up Nietzschean screeds years earlier at his parent’s house, the screeds had been among the things he’d burnt, but he’d kept the type writer. It had started off as a term project, but he had a growing stack of pages that were becoming his manuscript about his experiences in the Pacific. His hope was that it would help him put the events of his life into perspective.

Do I sense an incoming romance with Nancy?
 
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