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Here is a map I am working on that I think needs some criticism. Comments and questions?

Inkland Stronk! :p

I'm kinda sceptical of whether the Sovs could get both Iran and Iraq; it'll take a lot more than a Glorious Proletarian Revolution to get over sectarian hatred. Plus, if Britain's half as strong as the WIP makes out, no way they let the Russians get warm-water ports AND Abadan AND all the oilfields of southern Iraq.
 
Here is a map I am working on that I think needs some criticism. Comments and questions?

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I would suspect this is post-WWII. And I would say that, in this WWII, after WWI was won by the Central Powers (which, of course, could not prevent the collapse of Austria-Hungary) and after France went crazy, Germany/Britain/US(?) won against a France/USSR-alliance. In which France (Sorelianist France?) had possibly betrayed the USSR at some point, allowing the USSR to regain some areas in Europe as puppet. Japan was pretty much ignored as the US seems to have gone pretty isolationist.

Germany seems either democratic or a constitutional monarchy. It could be some sort of "militarist democracy" of course, where parties and groups like the Stahlhelm are revered, but I don't think it is a crazy dictatorship.

And then, peace came and this map seems to be immediately after the peace treaty.

And is the assumption correct that Britain is a (red?) Republic and no longer any sort of monarchy?

Inkland Stronk! :p

I'm kinda sceptical of whether the Sovs could get both Iran and Iraq; it'll take a lot more than a Glorious Proletarian Revolution to get over sectarian hatred. Plus, if Britain's half as strong as the WIP makes out, no way they let the Russians get warm-water ports AND Abadan AND all the oilfields of southern Iraq.

They could, but it seems to be a perfect situation for a Cold War. Of course, there will be an Iron Curtain built from Memel to Edirne, between West and East Poland. And in this Cold War, the Republic (?) of Britain will probably support either Sunnite rebels in Iraq and Afghanistan or Shi'a rebels in Iran. Probably the latter as this would deny the commies a lot of oil and warm water ports...
 
Sorry for the double post. I just wanted to post my MOTF 117 entry.
Please critque it. :D
only one response on my map :(. Is that because you guys thinks its bad or you just haven't seen it. :(
I re-uploaded it, just in case people hadn't seen it.
Two things, but essentially, one thing: the Chinese translation. First, the wording. In Ancient China we don't emphasise the "中國" concept, which only means "Middle Country" at that time and contained only geographical definition, much like "Italy" was before being unified as a national state during the 1840s, rather they called themselves "The subject of the Great Tang/Song/Yuan/Ming/Qing Dynasty" ("大唐/ 宋/明/清子民"), so if the Chinese really founded themselves a new country beyond the reach of China, they won't indicate their own geographical origin, but name themselves in a sense of localism(like the the Lanfang Republic), and words like "阿拉伯", "聯合" and "大公國" are rather modern: Up to Tang Dynasty till the founding of the RoC, Arabia was being called "大食" (translated through the Persian name "Tazik") by Chinese, and the latter two ("united" and "principality")are just being used since the 20th century, and are really alien concepts to the ancient people who always lived under a unified empire where feudalism and disunity were greatly discouraged by official Confucian ethics. Second, the arrangement. In ancient times, Chinese writing were directed from right to left or from up to bottom, surprising similar to Arabic, as to follow the Yin-yang order, where right side and the top represents strong and bright, and left side and the bottom represents weak and darkness, and the former should be in front of the latter as a result, only after republican era was Chinese being reformed to have the left-to-right direction, because of the New Cultural Movement when the westernised intellectual aimed at defying any tradition and replaces it with western culture, thus the new writing direction which followed the European style.

And there are two thing I appreciated, which are the use of Traditional Chinese:D and your concept of a Chinese empire outside the Central Realm:cool:. Consider naming your country with features like the cultural origins from both the Chinese immigrants and the native peoples, and the geographical name of the territory, feel free to PM me for further advice.;)
Thanks for the advice, I used Google trnaslate, evidently not a good idea, unfortunately I can't rename the country, as it has already been entered, unless you know a way around that, into the MOTF. I will PM you soon.

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Here is the final map. For a quick idea of the time involved, Obama is to the current president what Lyndon B. Johnson is to Obama. The Soviet Union has been gone for about as long as it was around to begin with. Most members of this board who are still alive are in their 70s-80s. It's a long time, but also, in the end, not much time at all. 2065, folks.

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I would suspect this is post-WWII. And I would say that, in this WWII, after WWI was won by the Central Powers (which, of course, could not prevent the collapse of Austria-Hungary) and after France went crazy, Germany/Britain/US(?) won against a France/USSR-alliance. In which France (Sorelianist France?) had possibly betrayed the USSR at some point, allowing the USSR to regain some areas in Europe as puppet. Japan was pretty much ignored as the US seems to have gone pretty isolationist.

Germany seems either democratic or a constitutional monarchy. It could be some sort of "militarist democracy" of course, where parties and groups like the Stahlhelm are revered, but I don't think it is a crazy dictatorship.

And then, peace came and this map seems to be immediately after the peace treaty.

And is the assumption correct that Britain is a (red?) Republic and no longer any sort of monarchy?



They could, but it seems to be a perfect situation for a Cold War. Of course, there will be an Iron Curtain built from Memel to Edirne, between West and East Poland. And in this Cold War, the Republic (?) of Britain will probably support either Sunnite rebels in Iraq and Afghanistan or Shi'a rebels in Iran. Probably the latter as this would deny the commies a lot of oil and warm water ports...
No way that was a CP-victory WW1; Germany proper has it's post-anschluss interwar borders. Poland looks to have Molotov-Ribbentrop partition borders, so the invasion of Poland happened.

I think the PoD was a Socialist revolution in Britain during the 20s which spread to Normandy. With the British and French against each other, the Germans have a free hand in Central Europe. From the look of it, the Germans snagged Elass-Lothringen from France at some point.
 
only one response on my map :(. Is that because you guys thinks its bad or you just haven't seen it. :(
I re-uploaded it, just in case people hadn't seen it.

Thanks for the advice, I used Google trnaslate, evidently not a good idea, unfortunately I can't rename the country, as it has already been entered, unless you know a way around that, into the MOTF. I will PM you soon.

i like the map quite a bit. I like the concept a lot (like, a lot a lot :D) But lack of contrast between the shoreline and the ocean makes it harder the read. Otherwise, cool map and interesting concept!
 
Here is a map I am working on that I think needs some criticism. Comments and questions?

I am unsure if the Netherlands stays in the same general shape during these maps due to the scale, but I think their either would or wouldn't claim more of their inland sea due to the added resources of Indonesia and the possible lack of need with those island to take more land. You can pick or choose for the criticism. Should I take it from the lack of internal borders in Germany though that it is like Nazi Germany in that it managed to completely tear apart the old boundaries and make everyone equal in dancing to the tune of Berlin? Also, how did Germany end up with Luxemborug while Belgium got Eupen-Malmedy? As you can tell yes, I am the sort of person who looks at the pixels on these maps while criticizing. You may also want to do something about Norway-in-Exile. They did not manage to get their ownership of Svalbard recognized until after WWI, incase that is part of the POD here, while Peter Island is different from the rest. Peter Island being the blue thing southwest of Chile. Also, you should probably have the British, Canadians, Americans, Australians, or Irish invade Costa Rica. I find it unrealistic that there is a single spot left in the Spanish Main that wasn't invaded by an Anglophonic country. You may also want to color the expanded Channel Islands with the rest of their Duchy of Normandy.
 
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Because it's hard to determine tone on the Internet (frigging Poe's Law...when did Edgar Allen Poe even get a computer, anyway? :p), I thought I'd let you know I added an acknowledgement on the competition post soon after I Krieger'd. Wouldn't want to be dishonest :eek:

Hey, I really don't mind. I enjoyed making it.
Good luck!
 
What the heck is going on in that map? :eek:

The 47 traitors all left the Union after the prez went all Logan Act on them. A few other republican states left, but Tennesee and Mississippi left the new nation a la West Virginia, and Texas and friends formed their own nation, reflecting their tensions with the East.
 
Here is the final map. For a quick idea of the time involved, Obama is to the current president what Lyndon B. Johnson is to Obama. The Soviet Union has been gone for about as long as it was around to begin with. Most members of this board who are still alive are in their 70s-80s. It's a long time, but also, in the end, not much time at all. 2065, folks.

How do you make up those Chinese Uyghur border? and essentially all other autonomous zones in China?
 
Thanks for the advice, I used Google trnaslate, evidently not a good idea, unfortunately I can't rename the country, as it has already been entered, unless you know a way around that, into the MOTF. I will PM you soon.

My pleasure. Despite the name, the scenario is really fascinating, just imagine how the Chinese build the empire in a really alien and unexpected background from scratch.

EDIT: I will vote for you.
 
Here is the final map. For a quick idea of the time involved, Obama is to the current president what Lyndon B. Johnson is to Obama. The Soviet Union has been gone for about as long as it was around to begin with. Most members of this board who are still alive are in their 70s-80s. It's a long time, but also, in the end, not much time at all. 2065, folks.

Seems almost pleasant. The Dutch shored up their dikes with the Maldvies? And by pleasant, meaning my own countries didn't lose much land.
 
Exhausted from my sister's graduation and party. Decided to make maps. here.
Most of ya'll probably know what this one's about. Slight expansion before all-out war with the Ottomans. Not pictured because I'm an idiot: Austrian influence over Cyrenaica.

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I love this map! Really interesting to see how this Austria's position would develop throughout European history.
 
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