This ist my first TL and I'm not a born English Speaker so please excuse my mistakes. Google helps me.
I'm open to constructive criticism, I even ask for it. Recognizing a mistake is the first step to never make it again.
This will be a After 1900 TL with prologs in the middle ages and before 1900.
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The first butterfly: Jun. 10th 1190, near Seleucia
It was a long hot day, as every day. Barbarossa felt his fatigue, but didn't wanted to rest now, the town was almost reached. Just the river then he could collect his energy in a cool house.
Just before he could enter the river on his horse, a strange butterfly catched his attention. It was a species he never had seen before. He slowed down and followed it but than entered the river.
Suddenly a knight was thrown into the river only a few meter ahead. Helpers could rescue him, but a thought followed Barbarossa the rest of the day: What would have happened, if he hadn't slowed down? He knew that he was not as strong and fit as in his youth. If something had happened to him, the morale of his army would be broken. But thanks god, this was just a fictional thought.
<< The next months are more or less than OTL, some skirmishes more but nothing else >>
May 1191, Akkon
English and french troops arrived at Akkon. Only to see the german flag atop the city.
The town has conquered some months ago, but know surrounded by the muslims. Barbarossa's well rested troops and the reinforcements forced the muslims to retreat after some rather harsh skirmishes.
But know the three kings began to argue who would be the leader for the crusaders. Barbarossa had the better chances, he arrived earlier, established a base. The french king was forced to leave for france when his important vasall Pillip of Elsass died without children and the succession had to be settled.
With two kings left Barbarossa proposed a trade: Richard the Lionheart would lead the crusaders from now, but at a given time Richard had to fullfill one single favor from Barbarossa.
Barbarossa felt his powers vanish and he started to prepare for his last days. A promised favor by the english king might be better than the leadership of a man who could die each day.
October 1191
After hearing that Saladins troops were far away to be beaten, Richard decided to ignore Jerusalem for the time and to enlarge the crusaders rule of the coastline first.
This affected the morale, but was strategically seen the right decision. Even if Jerusalem would be conquered, after this most of the crusaders would leave for their homelands, leaving the conquered grounds to a mighty muslim army.
Barbarossa used the fact that Richard had the supreme command to strengthen the morals of his german troops with the promise that their time would come.
May 1192
After the betrayal of the french king, who attacked english beloungings back in europe, Richard had to return to europe as fast as he could. But he couldn't just leave, because he needed crusading english troops in england. This would cripple the crusaders and all successes would be gone.
Now was the time that Barbarossa came to Richard and spoke his favor: Peace with the muslims, as soon as possible. Richard thought in the same direction, but didn't wanted to acknowledge this before his german rival. But he had no other choice.
Barbarossa had negotiators corresponding with Saladin for months. And now it was the time that Barbarossa could unfold his last and maybe greatest scheme.
<< The following peace-treaty is more or less the same as in OTL, Acknowledgement of the conquests of the Crusaders, return of Askalon, free entry for unarmed pilgrims to jerusalem >>
All the problems in the last months of the third crusade would be counted as Richards fault, the peace-treaty and access to jerusalem as Barbarossas victory.
The treaty had another agreement: Saladin promised Barbarossa and his loyal vasalls free access and leave to jerusalem for the condition, that Barbarossa would remain in jerusalem until his death. Barbarossa was now sure that he would die soon and wanted a last great sign before dying.
Barbarossa gave all of his titles to his son and send him back to europe. He himself held a speech in Jerusalem, later known as the "German Milestone".
He praised the powers of England and France and acknowledged their positions in their regions as he did with Byzantium.
Then he spoke of his dream that the Germans would inherit a similar role in their region, namely central europe a the successor of the west roman empire.
Two days later Barbarossa was found dead in his bed. He fall peacefully asleep. His corpse was brought back to Europe.
<< Barbarossa alive hasn't changed much of history. It just gave the germans a stronger identity which would come in handy later in the TL. >>
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The second Butterfly: Sep. 28th 1883, Rüdesheim
The historical assassination attempt on the german Kaiser Wilhelm I. was a failure. Because of the bad weather the dynamite didn't work.
One of the Anarchists around August Reinsdorf was seriously ill and coughed up blood for the last days. But he wanted to partake at his event.
The assassination failed, but his deadly bacilli sprayed upon a single butterfly which would later land on the Kaiser. He scared away the butterly, but how unlucky he was, some bacilli would later find its way in his body.
Two months later the Kaiser died after a short but serious disease.
December 6th 1883, Berlin
Friedrich Wilhelm was coronated as the new german Kaiser as Friedrich III.
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Questions: Could anybody help me? I imagined the case, that the son was on a voyage when his father became ill. This message could only transmitted a few days later. Friedrich Wilhelm rushed back to his father to see him before he died, barely missing his father by a few hours. On his way he promies, he would even stop to smoke if he could make it.
As a result he created a research facility for radio-technics which would later enable better communications.
Now the question is: How far was the radiotechnic developed at this time? Is this a plausible development?
I am thankful for each comment and hope I didn't make too much mistakes.
I'm open to constructive criticism, I even ask for it. Recognizing a mistake is the first step to never make it again.
This will be a After 1900 TL with prologs in the middle ages and before 1900.
++++ ++++ ++++
The first butterfly: Jun. 10th 1190, near Seleucia
It was a long hot day, as every day. Barbarossa felt his fatigue, but didn't wanted to rest now, the town was almost reached. Just the river then he could collect his energy in a cool house.
Just before he could enter the river on his horse, a strange butterfly catched his attention. It was a species he never had seen before. He slowed down and followed it but than entered the river.
Suddenly a knight was thrown into the river only a few meter ahead. Helpers could rescue him, but a thought followed Barbarossa the rest of the day: What would have happened, if he hadn't slowed down? He knew that he was not as strong and fit as in his youth. If something had happened to him, the morale of his army would be broken. But thanks god, this was just a fictional thought.
<< The next months are more or less than OTL, some skirmishes more but nothing else >>
May 1191, Akkon
English and french troops arrived at Akkon. Only to see the german flag atop the city.
The town has conquered some months ago, but know surrounded by the muslims. Barbarossa's well rested troops and the reinforcements forced the muslims to retreat after some rather harsh skirmishes.
But know the three kings began to argue who would be the leader for the crusaders. Barbarossa had the better chances, he arrived earlier, established a base. The french king was forced to leave for france when his important vasall Pillip of Elsass died without children and the succession had to be settled.
With two kings left Barbarossa proposed a trade: Richard the Lionheart would lead the crusaders from now, but at a given time Richard had to fullfill one single favor from Barbarossa.
Barbarossa felt his powers vanish and he started to prepare for his last days. A promised favor by the english king might be better than the leadership of a man who could die each day.
October 1191
After hearing that Saladins troops were far away to be beaten, Richard decided to ignore Jerusalem for the time and to enlarge the crusaders rule of the coastline first.
This affected the morale, but was strategically seen the right decision. Even if Jerusalem would be conquered, after this most of the crusaders would leave for their homelands, leaving the conquered grounds to a mighty muslim army.
Barbarossa used the fact that Richard had the supreme command to strengthen the morals of his german troops with the promise that their time would come.
May 1192
After the betrayal of the french king, who attacked english beloungings back in europe, Richard had to return to europe as fast as he could. But he couldn't just leave, because he needed crusading english troops in england. This would cripple the crusaders and all successes would be gone.
Now was the time that Barbarossa came to Richard and spoke his favor: Peace with the muslims, as soon as possible. Richard thought in the same direction, but didn't wanted to acknowledge this before his german rival. But he had no other choice.
Barbarossa had negotiators corresponding with Saladin for months. And now it was the time that Barbarossa could unfold his last and maybe greatest scheme.
<< The following peace-treaty is more or less the same as in OTL, Acknowledgement of the conquests of the Crusaders, return of Askalon, free entry for unarmed pilgrims to jerusalem >>
All the problems in the last months of the third crusade would be counted as Richards fault, the peace-treaty and access to jerusalem as Barbarossas victory.
The treaty had another agreement: Saladin promised Barbarossa and his loyal vasalls free access and leave to jerusalem for the condition, that Barbarossa would remain in jerusalem until his death. Barbarossa was now sure that he would die soon and wanted a last great sign before dying.
Barbarossa gave all of his titles to his son and send him back to europe. He himself held a speech in Jerusalem, later known as the "German Milestone".
He praised the powers of England and France and acknowledged their positions in their regions as he did with Byzantium.
Then he spoke of his dream that the Germans would inherit a similar role in their region, namely central europe a the successor of the west roman empire.
Two days later Barbarossa was found dead in his bed. He fall peacefully asleep. His corpse was brought back to Europe.
<< Barbarossa alive hasn't changed much of history. It just gave the germans a stronger identity which would come in handy later in the TL. >>
++++ ++++
The second Butterfly: Sep. 28th 1883, Rüdesheim
The historical assassination attempt on the german Kaiser Wilhelm I. was a failure. Because of the bad weather the dynamite didn't work.
One of the Anarchists around August Reinsdorf was seriously ill and coughed up blood for the last days. But he wanted to partake at his event.
The assassination failed, but his deadly bacilli sprayed upon a single butterfly which would later land on the Kaiser. He scared away the butterly, but how unlucky he was, some bacilli would later find its way in his body.
Two months later the Kaiser died after a short but serious disease.
December 6th 1883, Berlin
Friedrich Wilhelm was coronated as the new german Kaiser as Friedrich III.
###########################
Questions: Could anybody help me? I imagined the case, that the son was on a voyage when his father became ill. This message could only transmitted a few days later. Friedrich Wilhelm rushed back to his father to see him before he died, barely missing his father by a few hours. On his way he promies, he would even stop to smoke if he could make it.
As a result he created a research facility for radio-technics which would later enable better communications.
Now the question is: How far was the radiotechnic developed at this time? Is this a plausible development?
I am thankful for each comment and hope I didn't make too much mistakes.