I really like this TL and am loving your writing style.
I do have a few comments/questions – they mostly relate back to your opening posts but given that I’ve just discovered this discussion board I hope you don’t mind.
Certainly, carry on.
I agree Harold would have eventually removed the atheling Edgar. Afterall, Harold was the chief suspect in the untimely death of Edgar’s father, Edward the Exile in 1057. And the difference of opinion between Harold and Gyrth is entirely plausible. I have always thought Harold and Leofwine were close and the most alike – Harold and Leofwine went a viking together during the Godwines exile in 1051/2.
Yes, that's why I chose Gyrth. According to what scant reports there are, Harold and Leofwine seem to be the closest out of the brothers.
I am somewhat confused as to the Anglo-Dansk who feature prominently in your TL. Who are they? Where are they located? And how did the House of Leofric become their leaders? Historically the House of Godwine were the leaders of the Anglo-Danish faction at the Confessor’s court.
The Anglo-Dansk are the ethnic group which constitutes the greater part of the people in the north of England, being something of a fusion between Anglo-Saxon culture and Danish, with a smattering of Scots. While, yes, the House of Godwine often represented the Anglo-Danish faction, Harold's focus on the south alienated the House of Leofric and many Angledansk thanes in the north, which eventually led to the civil war shown.
Of the ring of earls:
Good to see Oswulf take Northumbria. But given he was de facto if not de jure under-earl from 1065 (ie essentially the Scottish march leaving Yorkshire to Morcar) what was his role in the civil war?
Luckily for Oswulf, he's a smart cookie, and kept his head down during the war, essentially avoiding openly supporting either side. As the result of the war became clear, however, he did provide token forces to Harold's men, and has thusly been rewarded.
And his cousin Waltheof (of House Siward), earl of Huntingdon and Northampton – what role did he play in the civil war? And did the civil war remove his need to carry on the bloodfeud with the House of Carl?
He fought fairly zealously for the king, what with firstly many of his northern rivals having joined with the House of Leofric, and secondly there being no reason for him to rebel. Seeing as how the targets of that bloodfeud are mostly dead by this point, yes, the bloodfeud's essentially over.
And Morcar. I find it interesting you kept him as earl when it is most likely that Harold removed him after Stamford Bridge leaving Marlsweyn (who was Sheriff of Lincolnshire) to run things.
I've never heard that before, do you have a source? (it's not that I don't believe you, I'm just curious)
Church matters: You have foreshadowed resolving things with the Pope but what of the English clerics? What becomes of Stigand who is not a bona-fide Archbishop (of Canterbury)? And Aldred, Archbishop of York (and the man who crowned Harold) – what was his role in the civil war?
I'll be covering church matters in a few updates, but let me tell you right now that Aldred staunchly supported Harold, despite the suspicious death of the Atheling. Aldred has spent most of Harold's reign so far encouraging the development of better relations with the Pope, which have fallen on deaf ears for the moment. For his part, Stigand is being championed by the House of Godwine in defiance of Papal wishes, mostly as a result of Papal support for William.
There are a number of other historical personages I’m curious about but probably the most pressing is a certain former thegn from Lincolnshire. Will he be returning from exile?
Well, in between fighting bears and rescuing Cornish princesses, good ol' Hereweard really doesn't have the time to return to England, even if he wanted to! I might make mention of his adventures, fictional and otherwise, throughout Europe though.
Very nice map, too bad about Italy/Sicily (hey, I'm not map genius myself so I'm not exactly much of a judge of quality
). And while I'm intellectually aware of the Danelaw's historical reach, it's still a bit surprising to see its extent upon rendering in visual form! After the recent war to bring the Anglo-Danes under Winchester's thumb, would you say there's been any success in rebuilding and hopefully carrying on as before, or are there still issues in repairing the deep hurting done to the land? I only ask since we've now seen what's become of France (and seen how Aquitaine and Narbonne/Toulouse has taken the lead in the region).
If you're interested, I'll be discussing the new state of affairs in Italy next update, and it should have some nice, juicy bits. Yes, the Danelaw was huge! It was surprising to me when I first read it. As for rebuilding, Oswulf has had some success in resettling the devastated rural areas and returning refugees to their homes, but the cultural scars will last much longer. Meanwhile, some lawlessness continues to be a problem. However, don't worry, England will not go the way of France.
[FONT="]In my enthusiasm for your TL I missed a couple of errors.
I do realise that such errors are the fault of the
c.1290 scribe of
The Chronicle of the Saxon Kings and not the faithful transcriber of this wonderful history.
Err, yes, yes, it's his fault, not mine!
The first is from the OP: [/FONT][FONT="] Or was Hastings fought on Oct 1 ITTL and not Oct 14 as per OTL?
That's a mistake of mine, I meant to type a 4 and just forgot.
I'll fix it, thank you.
The second is from post #38: Edwin is the older brother – that is why he inherited the earldom of Mercia on the death of their father (Aelfgar) in 1062. Morcar wanting to be an earl conveniently positioned himself to take advantage of the revolt against Tostig in 1065.[/FONT]
This is actually intentional, showing the inaccuracy of the chroniclers in a more subtle way. Seriously, I promise, this is intentional.