Caesar Biden
Banned
Hi, I am a first time commentor, but I have greatly enjoyed your TL so far.
I so much enjoy this period of time and this is such a well-drafted story.
Concerning the realism I have a few notes for your consideration:
A) Alexios was born ca 1106, which means that he would be 52 at 1158 when he had his first son. His wife would probably be in her late 40s so this does not seem so feasible. Maybe if his son was born in the early 1140s around the time he took the throne.
B) BTW Alexios' brother Andronicos had already two sons named John (born ca 1128) and Alexios (born ca 1136), the latter of whom gained infamy as Protosebastos, lover of Empress Maria of Antioch and acting regent after OTL Manuel's death.
C) John Axouch was about the same age as the Emperor John so in 1158 he would be almost 70 years old, too old to take the field if not dead. His son Alexios was married to TTL Emperor Alexios' daughter.
D) Meanwhile where is Manuel? What he's up to?
Please dont make Alexios too much paranoid about his brother. A man of his quality should fare better.
Thanks for the feedback! I hope I can answer some of what you're talking about:
A) I know it's a bit of a stretch, but I don't think it's impossible. We don't know exactly how old Kata of Georgia was, so if we assume mid 40s, it's still possible, just very unlikely. Running off the idea that John is something of a miracle, it worked out in the end.
B) I can't include everything about the imperial family in one chapter, but I do know about Andronikos' children. They were rather important in OTL
C) A man in his late sixties would have a lot of trouble leading armies, but if he's in decent shape there is a historical president of older men pulling it off. I wouldn't read too much into it. Iconium was his last major campaign, and I took a few liberties in age.
D) Manuel is not sitting on his butt, I'll say that much. I may even write the next chapter from his POV, if I decide to change into narrative.
E)I'm trying to base a lot of Alexios from what I know about John. John was fairly secretive, and kept a lot of things to himself, especially fears and suspicions. Alexios is the same way. The fact that he's paranoid of his brother is not his defining feature or anything, that's just unfortunately how he's starting to look at Isaac.
From Alexios' perspective, Isaac has killed Andronikos, then directly challenged his authority by taking Iconium, setting himself up as his rival. Alexios knows his history, and he's seen what has happened to earlier emperors with powerful generals, so I think he's right to be a little worried.
I do get what you're saying though, and in the next couple of chapters I will focus less on Alexios' suspicions. He's going to have plenty to do besides worrying about Isaac anyway.
I'm glad you're enjoying the TL. I'll try to incorporate some of what you're saying into my writing. Right now, the hardest part for me is enacting all the butterflies that will occur. I'm well past the point of brainstorming for this part of the TL, but I'm still constantly editing and re-writing and researching with whatever information I can find. You'd be surprised how few works have been written about the Komnenoi, compared to other subjects.