They may be asking for a story-only thread, with just proper entries and none of the interstitial discussion. You could do that over in Finished Timelines, and I've found those sorts of threads very handy, especially if it's for a very popular timeline (like this one) which generates a lot of...
I noticed this way of articulating it too, especially if you do a bit of eye dialect - from Montgom'ry to the sea! - it's not too unnatural-sounding and keeps the right number of syllables for that melody.
I think I'm feeling an EU story coming on. For reference, how far inland does the RU/NUSA control in Colombia/Venezuela, as far as staging and actual on-the-ground operations go?