MotF 123: Bricks and Marble

Krall

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Bricks and Marble


The Challenge
Make a map showing an alternate city or an alternate version of an OTL city.

The Restrictions
There are no restrictions on when your PoD or map may be set. Fantasy, sci-fi, and future maps are allowed, but blatantly implausible (ASB) maps are not.

If you're not sure whether your idea meets the criteria of this challenge, please feel free to PM me.

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The entry period for this round shall end when the voting thread is posted on Sunday the 20th of September.

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Any discussion must take place in the main thread. If you post anything other than a map entry (or a description accompanying a map entry) in this thread then you will be asked to delete the post. If you refuse to delete the post, post something that is clearly disruptive or malicious, or post spam then you may be disqualified from entering in this round of MotF and you may be reported to the board's moderators.

Remember to vote on the previous round of MotF!
 
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9th Century Illustration of the Canal City of Napãiyya - commonly attributed to the Nazarin Explorer Yishharu Ibn Abad

Of note are the embellishments in the four corners of the map, showing greater detail of, Clockwise from the top left, a stall of the Great Suq, the towers of the House of Stars, The Great Beacon of the Idumaeans, and the Great Gate of Iskandar. This map appears to vastly underestimate the size of the city, which, until it's sack in the 13th century by the Steppe Hordes, and subsequent conquest by the Innocent's Crusade, was one of the populous in the Levant. Napãiyya is notable as one of the cities with the longest known continual human occupation: archaeological digs in the catacombs of the city have revealed neolithic remains, and of course many of the Mediterranean epics speak of the city as a safe harbor for their adventurers. Lucius of Rome, for example, rests for forty days and nights in the city, while Sinoueh the Egyptian seeks the wisdom of it's masters. Even Iskandar paused in the city in his great conquest, naming it one of the jewels in his crown.
 
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Tardis218

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The Nuclear War started and ended in a blink of the eye. In between the blinks a reign of fire and terror stretched across Earth’s cities. Thousands of years of culture, gone. And with that went almost everything. But after the terror had ended, the Earth was reborn. New civilizations rose from the dust, and one of those few is in Baghdad. The city, along with many that saw terror strike was destroyed, but somehow the American embassy stood. Some say it was an act of God, others say it was luck. But, with 15,000 or so people they started anew. Here is a map of the city in 2020:

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Manna Hattan

New York, as if settled by the French. Named "Nouvelle-Angoulême" by the Florentine explorer Giovanni da Verrazzano, mapping North America for the French Crown in 1524.





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Since fantasy maps are allowed, here's my contribution:

The town of Mailberg lies in the lands governed by the prince-abbot of Hardegg. It is a market town locally known for its dumplings, a rather sprightly white wine and the fingerbone of St. Emmeran kept in its main church.

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It's from a low-fantasy/late medieval world I cobbled up for an unfinished cooperative novel and possibly RP campaign.

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The tale of Lenniweck, also known as Fort Moor, Bababinnetudun, Lenniwick, or Illenewek, is a long history, characterized by brutality, violence, racism, and classism. The first city on the site, was known as Pagewacteego by the Mahenata Natives [1] was established roughly in the 9th century, though settlement can be traced back to at least 600 AD. Flourishing during the Interregnum Thaw, the residents of Pagewactiego formed part of the Chenco Culture, also known as the Moundbuilders or the Netongans (after the Netongo River)[2][3]. The society was sedentary, characterized by social stratification and large scale trade networks among smaller polities. The end of the Chenco culture arrived during the Early Modern Glaciation, with climate changes disrupting agriculture. Pagewactiego was emptied of people by 1400, and was not reoccupied until the Pulakar.

Fleeing from the English colonies in Raleighsland, black slaves had been trickling into the Native populations, both as slaves and as freedmen. By chance, a Todoro, a Muslim scholar, Muhammadu ibn 'Umar, was enslaved, and survived against the odds to get to America. His ideology spread among European and Native slaves. When the Hitcheeti had to call in allies to surpress a slave revolt, Muslim slaves entered the remnants of the Chenco trade routes. Many freed Africans set up smaller states in competition with the Natives. Ibrahim Kande Ba, leading the Fula speakers he led from captivity, settled Pagewactiego, giving it the name Babanbinnetudun, or 'Great Burial Mounds'. He built fortifications around the largest Mound, el Babanbinnetudun and fished and traded with local Freedmen states for food and survival.

The Inoca Peoples and Babanbinnetudun initially fought, but an eventual alliance was formed after the Wiedeaux Crusade, when large numbers of Natives were displaced, fleeing into the Netongo-Great Lakes Basin. Fula caste system and Islamic political thought entered the ideologies of the Inoca peoples and into the Netongo River basin. A mosque made from mud-bricks were built in Babanbinnetudun, and Kande Ba named himself Emir, and created a loose heirarchy based off of the Pulaaku codes. There were districts set up housing the various social classes: The Dimo (nobility) and Emir's court lived in the East of the city; The Sansari soldiers housed in the West. Non-Muslims were not allowed in the city proper, and the Natives (shatabaku) and middle class Pulukar lived across the Inoca River, and the servile Buzu were housed further away, on the banks of the Netongo River proper. In spite of these conditions, and tension between the radical Islamic Babans and the Ancestor worshiping Inoca, the alliance held firm for more than a century. Population expansion brought by Spanish Cattle was directed outward in a series of jihads against neighboring tribes such as the Shawnee and Miami. Trade brought Afro-Islamic ideology as far north as the Hudson Bay, and West to the Goldstone Mountains[4].

The Inoca-Pulakar period was ended in 1730 when the The Noveau Navarrese Company made the Tribes of the Netongo River Basin swear fealty to Noveau Navarre. Babanbinnetudun refused, and the next summer 13,000 Frenchmen and Native allies captured Babanbinnetudun, executed the Emir, and enslaved thousands of residents. Fort Moor was built over-top of the site of Babanbinnetudun, and only the Emir's Palace, the Great Mound, and the Al-Binnetudun Mosque (re-purposed as a Catholic Cathedral).

Noveau Navarrese Rule proved violent and destructive, with most of the original population of the area enslaved or killed, taking with them a legacy of the Netongans and the Pulukar. Though Native and African wives were very common Fort Moor was a segregated slaveocracy, with a complex racial hierarchy (ironically based in part of the Fula codes) where white French plantation owners lived at the top. For the most part, with the importation of more African Slaves, the social order stabilized into a three tiered system, with 'visible whites' as the ruling class, the 'Metis' forming a middle and lower class, and Africans forming the underclass of slaves.

The Netongo Rebellion saw the abolition of slavery, and the rise of the Watchman State. Taekota Pizi (Peter L'Ami in Noveau Navarre) lead the Netongo Revolution, and devolved power to smaller collectives (sachems), under the oversight of a federal polity. Each sachem could rule their own with various laws, but all obeyed the Great Sachem's laws. Sharia, Roman Law, and tribal codes all coexisted alongside a hybrid representative republic running it all.

Though after Taekota's Death the Netongo State fell to French vassalage once more, his ideas were adopted by the French administrators to keep revolts from occurring again. Eventually, the concept of a watchman state, watching over smaller states while being one polity was adopted all across the globe to varying degrees of success.

Eventually the Netongans were granted independence after the Dissolution of the French State, and the name Fort Moor was retired in favor of Lenniweck, after an early Courlandish translation which appeared on Willhelm von Windau's account of the ruins of the city.







[1] The Beaver Wars as we know them do not occur. The Ohio Basin and Mississippi region still contain Siouan speakers. The POD was James Hawkins contacting the tribes of Georgia, in an attempt to make an alliance against the Spanish.

[2] Netonga River - Mississippi River, as a result of the Courlandish contact with the Siouan speakers of the region rather than the Algonquian tribes of OTL. This name is a known Siouan word.

[3] Pagewactiego means approx. 'Big Mounds/Fort/Hill' in Omaha, the closest surviving language to the extinct Siouans of the Mississippi Basin. I took liberties given the lack of knowledge about Pre-Beaver War Mississippian dwellers.

[4] Rocky Mountains
 
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The City of Many Names, Babanbinnetudun, Pagewactiega, Fort Moor, Takota's Citadel, Islamic capital of America, Birthplace of the Watchman State


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A more detailed history to follow (posting to hit the deadline)...

Failure in the civil war due to British intervention; the Union falls to revolution in the late 1880s; initially, the Workersbund is limited to the Midwest, but the remnant U.S. (New York / New England) goes fascist in the 1920s and after the Great War brings the Socialist Internationale and the British Empire together in the 1930s, the remnant is split between the Workersbund and British control.

The Amerikan language was"de-imperialised" during the Totalist period of the early 1900s; essentially a more comprehensive spelling reform with Germanic influences...

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