I don't know if the original map is yours or not but it's kid of odd to see "Madrid" appearing in both of them. At this point of history the city does not even exist and given the current set of events it's unlikely to ever be born.
About the TL I can't really comment until I give it a proper read.
Originally Posted by statichaos
I know that I've flirted with ASB here and there, but Ed Wood a good director? That's the artistic equivalent of Sealion.